tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post1914966259467578478..comments2023-04-17T06:34:00.073-04:00Comments on Dances With Vodka: Here Comes The MonthDances With Vodkahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17826849421762801692noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-28895407765525158842013-08-06T21:06:52.751-04:002013-08-06T21:06:52.751-04:00There is palpable yearning here, but not the weepy...There is palpable yearning here, but not the weepy, clothes-rending kind; there's a certain hint of whimsy tugging at the edges of the wistful, which is paradoxically appealing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-9325746469849393892013-08-06T05:38:54.035-04:002013-08-06T05:38:54.035-04:00Filled with love...
And yearnings...
Enjoyed the r...Filled with love...<br />And yearnings...<br />Enjoyed the read..<br /><br />Thanks :)Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-80868603265403056032013-08-05T23:18:48.831-04:002013-08-05T23:18:48.831-04:00I like description of piano images...
'the eer...I like description of piano images...<br />'the eerie hum of the piano deepens with each slow blink<br />the notes press themselves into me<br />almost like the player is sitting on my chest' ~ powerful,sad, but with fairy dust...great poem!<br /><br /><br />humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-23292990005256041242013-08-05T13:42:40.729-04:002013-08-05T13:42:40.729-04:00Beautifully written. I especially loved the secon...Beautifully written. I especially loved the second verse. So many wonderful images!http://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/08/04/salt-and-pepper/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-74128857422567992772013-08-05T11:25:19.030-04:002013-08-05T11:25:19.030-04:00Wonderfully written. I too especially like the las...Wonderfully written. I too especially like the last verse. There is indeed both a sadness and a joy in the memories of relationships.PhotoDictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03058798426002401171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-68433802268257943182013-08-05T04:05:10.227-04:002013-08-05T04:05:10.227-04:00i can relate to some of the lines in the poem.
so ...i can relate to some of the lines in the poem.<br />so poignant and heart-felt. lovely piece of work. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-10753423173708467202013-08-04T19:59:39.544-04:002013-08-04T19:59:39.544-04:00A very emotionally stirring piece, written so beau...A very emotionally stirring piece, written so beautifully.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-21314432715889006692013-08-04T11:34:51.327-04:002013-08-04T11:34:51.327-04:00Such a poignant write, filled with sadness and mea...Such a poignant write, filled with sadness and meaning. Lovely!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-10334934620249887482013-08-04T09:59:21.220-04:002013-08-04T09:59:21.220-04:00You have captured all that is fleeting in relation...You have captured all that is fleeting in relationships with your careful imagery, the ghost march, the glitter, the breaking cloud. <br /><br />And how painful and authentic are these lines:<br /><br />The music compels the stillness into a moving confession:<br />I don't remember you everyday<br /><br />Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-66034824136754577412013-08-04T09:02:05.722-04:002013-08-04T09:02:05.722-04:00BeautifulBeautifulAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11745908224527807115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-33440543887452382332013-08-04T08:30:25.203-04:002013-08-04T08:30:25.203-04:00I like the missed beat, the music compelling to a ...I like the missed beat, the music compelling to a moving confession ~ I feel the sad exhaustion but also the acceptance of things as they are ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-989252665243971412013-08-04T08:04:13.161-04:002013-08-04T08:04:13.161-04:00wow...very nice...a moving confession...laughter l...wow...very nice...a moving confession...laughter like fairy dust sprinkled into your life, very cool, and happiness as the glitter of th mind...very cool phrasing and evocative....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-84195335592906512162013-08-04T07:54:50.626-04:002013-08-04T07:54:50.626-04:00This is wonderful writing. Poignant, from the dep...This is wonderful writing. Poignant, from the depths, the stuff of real life. POETRY with all caps!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7587370906975294887.post-28138362990148025972013-08-04T07:44:53.273-04:002013-08-04T07:44:53.273-04:00Your happiness is still glitter on my mind
I hear ...Your happiness is still glitter on my mind<br />I hear it, and I know you're okay<br />So I know it's okay, for me to be okay, too.<br /><br /><br />This is my favorite piece. Your poetry is lovely :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com