Follow by Email

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Clarity

This post is for this week's GBE2 topic: Clarity

A drop of love
And just like that
My heart has vision
Soul to soul contact
I accepted like charity
now the world is wide open
And I see it all with clarity
All these years I looked
But it wasn’t until my eyes closed tired
That seeing felt so new
And I was glad
 when they opened up to you

My rage
 has become distant
Since I’ve moved closer to love
Your hand scribbled poetry on my page
suddenly my heart no longer
 knows how to act its age
I’m looking at the sky
Like it has never been so blue
I’m seeing a cloud
Like a pillow that comforts two
I was searching for hope
when I tripped over you
and it has never
 felt so good to fall

When heaven doesn’t answer
I’ll sit quiet and wait for your call

~Trish

12 comments:

  1. Oh, now THIS is sweet, sweet, sweet!

    ReplyDelete
  2. "it has never felt so good to fall"
    my favorite line in this one.
    *sigh* I love your stuff!

    ReplyDelete
  3. LOVELY! Just beautiful.

    Thank you.

    Linda

    ReplyDelete
  4. Thank you! This isn't much and it's different than what I'm used to. But I was going for an easy, quick and light approach to this week's topic and well, I just wanted to participate again! I miss the GBE2!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Very nice poem. Rhythm and rhyme both are unconventional, which gives it a very fresh feel without damaging its music at all. Love it.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Awwww, that is so beautiful! You are a wise soul.

    ReplyDelete
  7. <3 this... you should fall more often!

    ReplyDelete
  8. breathe in.....ahhhh.....LOVE LOVE!!! awesome <3

    ReplyDelete

Comments are always welcome. Please say hi and let me know you were here!

Thank you!