Friday, August 30, 2013

Cut In

Without you,
A new year feels as sharp
 and wounding as the blade
of a new knife.

 If I could,
 I would let you cut in,
 So you can finish
 this dance with life.
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8 comments:

  1. sageAugust 30, 2013 at 9:56 AM

    a few words and I'm stunned, you've created a power image and invoke strong emotions

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  2. Myrna R.August 30, 2013 at 8:00 PM

    This is sharp. Pun inteded. Very good and to the point.

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  3. GraceAugust 31, 2013 at 11:55 AM

    That is sharp metaphor ~ Very well done ~

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  4. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerSeptember 2, 2013 at 8:29 PM

    I agree--so well done!

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  5. JoJanuary 5, 2014 at 7:41 PM

    So clever. Your mind amazes me. <3

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  6. Michael ToddJanuary 5, 2014 at 7:41 PM

    This piece is brilliant. Great analogy. I was feeling the pang.
    Leave it to you to always be found on the cutting edge, Trish.

    signed: Myke

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 5, 2014 at 7:41 PM

    Feeling your words.

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 6, 2014 at 5:28 PM

    Brilliant, for sure, but I'm going on the record to say I wouldn't want anyone-anyone--to cut in and continue the dance in your place.

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