Sunday, August 4, 2013

Soul Mates

Pardon me
for noticing,
but the loneliness in your words
closely resembles mine

I couldn't help but wonder
 if we are soul mates.

And if we put our words
in the same room
and stirred them together
would they make love?
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23 comments:

  1. sageAugust 4, 2013 at 1:14 PM

    A beautiful thought

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  2. TALONAugust 4, 2013 at 1:47 PM

    First of all, I love your blog's name. :)

    This was beautiful...the imagery of the words together is just stellar. Loved this.

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  3. Vandana SharmaAugust 4, 2013 at 1:47 PM

    Soulmates think alike and understand each other very well, even if far because of destiny, still they are together.

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    1. Dances With VodkaAugust 4, 2013 at 3:48 PM

      They certainly do, and it's a beautiful thing seeing them come together! Thank you, Vandana!

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  4. AnonymousAugust 4, 2013 at 2:12 PM

    I like it.

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  5. Monkey WitchAugust 4, 2013 at 2:44 PM

    :)

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  6. JoAugust 4, 2013 at 2:53 PM

    I thought we weren't going to call it anything?

    Love the imagery here.

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    1. Dances With VodkaAugust 4, 2013 at 3:49 PM

      LOL! You know me, I'm always changing my mind...that's why I have no tattoos.

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  7. UnknownAugust 4, 2013 at 6:36 PM

    delightfully hopeful and romantic.

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  8. Madeleine Begun KaneAugust 5, 2013 at 2:10 AM

    I really enjoyed that!

    Madeleine Begun Kane

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  9. AnonymousAugust 5, 2013 at 10:01 AM

    It was a pleasure stopping by. Thanks for visiting.

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    1. Dances With VodkaAugust 5, 2013 at 8:38 PM

      and a pleasure having you here, as well! Thank you, Booguloo! Love your name!

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  10. TimoteoAugust 5, 2013 at 10:51 AM

    Damn...I hope so.

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  11. AnonymousAugust 7, 2013 at 11:09 AM

    oh this is gorgeous - the kind of unexpected perfect thought-poem that tumbles me into love with it. Love love love the final stanza

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  12. MaryAugust 10, 2013 at 7:59 AM

    Oh, I DO think so. I really like this poem!

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